All Comments on 'Picking up the Girls'

P/M.. I did not like it much because of five chapters of "He said, She said". So if you write the next story in the first person, "I, She, he", chances are you may have a hit....

Try a My first time, story.........

That was a good story about a father finding his two daughters moonlighting as prostitutes. It was quite nice the way you wrote the story about two of them and how their dad had been dominating their stepmother for so many years. I like how the sequence in the hotel room took place with the stepmother showing up before he had sex with his oldest daughter for the first time. It would be nice to see a second chapter to the story.

great story shitty way to end a wonderful story like this.......what a shame.

Cant stop touching myself.

I really wanna bei fucked like one of this whores!

Please wright more stories like this!