All Comments on 'Pickle-face and the Professor'

Beautiful story. Very well written.

Terrific story! Well written with two likable and relatable character. Free use in a romance story! I never would have imagined it, but it worked. I will be checking out some other of your stories. 5*

5 Stars! A really beautifully crafted story, so well told. I always love what you write. You're just so gifted.

Great story ... read it while enjoying a nice warm fire playing on my 65" tv in my room. Very relaxing !

What a fun and wonderful story! Not as erotic as some of your scenes, but still an amazing and enjoyable tale. 5*

Very nice. HIm being broke was a bit of a weird twist. Looking for a chapter 2 for his fortunes to reverse.

Good story, well written. The idea of free use sex in a romance, interesting and it worked. Would love to see this go further and recover his funds, perhaps Allie running into Meredith???

I'm going with it was a setup, but that didn't take anything from the story. Great balance of narrative and dialogue with good plot flow. 4.8*

Loved the story. Fun to think of it as a read. What a good story does I guess. Thanks...

Thanks so very much for the kind comments, everyone! I never expected this story to get such a positive reception. What a wonderful way to end 2023.

Gave it 5 *. Yet it's really Erotic Couplings material.

They might make an interesting couple!

5

Hey, really enjoyed this. The dialogue was excellent and the characterization was as well. Bravo!

5 stars and maybe a follow up chapter?

It could be posted in Erotic Couplings, right, but it really belongs where it is, in Romance. Very well done. (And I probably never would have noticed it, in EC. My reading time is limited enough that I don't go there.)

Thanks, WilCox49 (and tim0277, GardeningGirly and Boyd Percy). So happy you enjoyed the story!

Recently I've realized there are a few gatekeepers in Romance trying to enforce what they view as "proper". I think with EC being a general garbage dump for any hetero two-person story, any story with characters with strong feelings for each other, a possible future and who are not just randomly mashing their bits together should be acceptable for Romance. But that's just my opinion. I won't gatekeep on this or any other category. If Laurel allows a story into a category, that's good enough for me.