All Comments on 'Picnic in the Woods'

by SimonMDrew

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Amateurish

Your start is as if the character landed from the moon.

The story has an angle to develop the erotica, but no- you had to spoil it by getting in deep.

Eish

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