All Comments on 'Picnic in the Woods'

This writer is well-organized and uses descriptive verbiage which would arouse any reader. I can picture in my mind all of the scenarios occurring.

This is just a strok story that has been mis-classified.

Cheers!

ypu are writing of an idealized act, sweet but not what you want...too gentle, unsatisfying. if i were there to lick up your magnificen thigh, spread your legs, dig my tongue into you, im sure you would fill my mouth instantly. i can hear your learning screams as i pound my cock into your drenched cunt and fill you...then, suck it out, share it with your tongue and mouth and fuck hard again. you write well, but this story is not what your body fantasizes about.