All Comments on 'Picnic Play'

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Scorpio44Scorpio44over 15 years ago
The joyful expression of exploration

for the first time, or any time! This story is playful, joyful, fun and oh, so sexy! If you read this and aren't either hard or wet (or both) you need help!

Thank you! Well done!

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Been busy lately, but will try to post some new ones. Thanks again for your constructive comments! ------------------------------------ I've written a fair bit of non-fiction before, but these are my first tries at fiction. So far, I'm having a blast with it! Thanks t...