All Comments on 'Picture Perfect'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very well-written, erotic and realistic story.

I loved this story and would like more. I felt myself being part of the story. I enjoy straight guy stories because I am straight myself.

jdmobaljdmobalover 10 years ago
Excellent work

What an excellent well written story, I hope there is a sequel in the works!!!

avidreadravidreadrover 10 years ago

Well written story with likable, interesting characters. I also wouldn't mind reading more about these two and how Jason deals with his sexuality in the bigger outside world.

sopharoonessopharoonesover 10 years ago
you dont have to be gay to be gay

does that make sense? i just really appreciated that jason wasnt a little b****, he didnt question it overly and just went with the flow and his instincts- that is just as hot as aleksis self confidence

69plus169plus1over 10 years ago
well done!

Great story. Excellent character development, I wanted to suck them both!

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oh Goodness

I loved the flow of the story and how amazingly eloquent it was. I genuinely hope that there maybe some more to the story and that you have a sequel coming towards us lol! Great job. 😊

erotikpassionserotikpassionsover 10 years ago
what the...

you sure can write! i loved every moment of it. looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Dan

PLEASEEEEE do more stories of this duo! I want to hear more about Jason's newly found gay side and maybe see him do even more! Keep writing, this is so good! Got me so aroused.

AkshunLoveAkshunLoveover 10 years ago
This was really hot

I love the contrast of Jason's almost caveman lovemaking style next to Aleksi's sophisticated experience. It's raw and sexy and really hot. Jason's inability to speak shows just how much and how intensely he was feeling, making it so much hotter. Please definitely write more :)

TimothyMTimothyMover 9 years ago

I agree with Akshun, that was extremely hot and yet sensual too. Good thing he got rid of the stupid girlfriend and was able to appreciate beauty and sexiness even if the context was surprising. Hope they become a couple, that would piss off Angel, LOL.

ramblingrobinramblingrobinover 9 years ago
Wow

Amazingly well-written. I am so impressed by this.

juggalosexkittenjuggalosexkittenover 9 years ago
absolutely...

Wonderful!

Mystic896Mystic896over 9 years ago

just wooow, speeeeeeechleeessss

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Extremely sexy

So... do all straight men immediately melt at the touch of the perfect sylphen guy? This was so erotic! Great build-up of characters and tension. Beautiful. (Legerdemer - it's not letting me sign in for some reason)

timmyid2timmyid2about 8 years ago
An extremely well written story.

Your story was exquisite. The sex scene told the story of MY first time perfectly, with delicious imagery and delightful turn of phrase.

I can't wait to read the rest.

timmy

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing

A superb story. Always fantasized having sex with long haired guys. I wish I could do it one day. Till then this story will be with me.

liz33ndliz33ndover 3 years ago

i enjoyed this, sexy

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Keeping the "lit" in Literotica. Turnoffs: -Clichés -Flat, one-dimensional characters -Misspelling "prostate" as "prostrate" Yes, I have a stick up my behind about writing mechanics, but since when is it a bad thing to have something up your behind? (Wink...)

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