All Comments on 'Picture Postcards from L.A.: Beryl'

Hi CK,

Spellbound is the One-Word I can say about reading your new story!💐💐

5⭐ & Cheers,

Wow just wow..... That's all I got

Binge read this and wish that there was more.

What a fabulous story. Thank you so much!

My favourite corvette is 1967 Chevrolet Corvette L88 Stingray

Just loved it. Looking forward to more.

Great story. Please keep writing this series. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

For the love of God, find her someone to love. Fourteen years since my partner passed, and I understand exactly how she feels. It hurts every day and it’s lonely. Please let Ray not be alone always.

Brilliant tale. For someone working undercover driving a Sting Ray all the time is something that really makes no sense. But keep the stories coming. Thanks.

This is a great opening as follow ups to your previous multi-chapter stories. Looking forward to continuing chapters

You would see me crying, tears streaming down my face ….. tragedy is part of our lives and missing a soulmate or better loosing one is the most horrific tragedy ever can be happen …… Ray must be in serious trouble in serious pain and living a life without her sunshine is a empty joyless one ….. my heart hurts

Well again your talent is out of question, five stars are not worth not even ten …. namaste

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@ first class flirt

Your comment sums it perfectly, yes find her a love for her soul to let her happiness and joy again …. Please

Fond memories of Brian M. Maonaigh wrote a great detective piece toward the end. It is sweet to see him remembered. Great story fantastic characters. Truly hope you are well.

Having to wait a year seems like cruel and unusual punishment. Does your Muse take bribes.

Five stars all the way love the way you built the characters and how you added Brian Mr. Wilson, detective Chris from your other story. I’m looking forward to many more stories about Ray.

@yhgtbk - the Crime and Punishment Story Event is in September so you only have to wait five months for the next installment.

Excellent story. I'd love to read more about Ray.