All Comments on 'Piercings'

I loved this. So erotic.

The concept behind the story is very interesting. And you have a pretty good eye for detail.

I loved the relationship you created between Allison and Maggie. It's powerful and intimate, things that are true of all great friendships. Oh, and that tongue stud? That's a great detail that had me, um, wishing for my own pierced boy toy.

Your writing came highly recommended by a good friend of mine. I can see why. Very fine work. Write more. Soon.

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Nice addition to Lit Randall ~ welcome.

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Your story was quite a journey. It was easy to place myself in each scene thru your descriptive talents. It made me long for spring and lazy days on the cape before the invasion of summer residents and tourists.

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I hope you'll share more with us.

I absolutely loved the detail of the tongue stud, such a small detail made the whole story.

Even more impressive written from a woman's perspective. Thoroughly enjoyed it.