All Comments on 'Piledriver Waltz'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very hot

Wow! This story got my pussy so wet. I was licking cum off my fingers like Luna & Aurora. Loved the vivid sex and the dialogue between the women. 5 stars for the amazing sex but the writing itself could use work. There are only 2 characters, both women, but you use pronouns like she and her so often it’s hard to follow. At times one can’t tell who is speaking or doing what to the other. It detracted from the intense sex.

Bridget69Bridget69almost 6 years ago
How much is that lady in the window?

Luna was certainly a satisfied customer! Disappointing that Aurora left at the end but it has to remain professional. I hope Luna will return to her window.

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 2 years ago

Will there be a repeat engagement? Does a relationship evolve? This is a great story and a great start; looking forward to you taking it to the next level.

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