All Comments on 'Pimp Daddy'

honestly, when I clicked thru to read this I thought it would be a lurid story of an overbearing father turning his daughter out. boy was I pleasantly surprised to find a more creative plot that was well written and smartly executed. nicely done!

Women get a taste of cock and then they want to fuck anyone including brother and dad. Pretty soon she will be out on the streets getting her cock fix

finally an incest plot that has depth and is very erotic. I wonder why it ended there, it keeps me thinking what will happen next. Perhaps this is the appetizer for the next main course installment. Like all your other stories, excellent original plot.

"A scandal good ruin..."? That's an example of how badly this needed a good editor. Due to all the errors, the flow of the story was interrupted. Even a decent proofreading would have caught most of the problems. If you are going to write a sequel (or second chapter), be more vigilant about the proofreading and editing.

This was an amazing story, please keep more coming. The plot was perfect and so original. -daddy's girl

It's good.

need to answer that last question... could she be both? Built it all up to having relations with dad, then leaving the hotel, and now what?.. Brother knows it's her, does dad get to find out? Where do things go, now that she's been with him too, and knows how he's running ALL aspects of the job?

Yes please part 2