All Comments on 'Pinball Wizardess'

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

Very nice romantic story,with no over the top ideas. Of course,myself being a pinball fan didn't hurt either...

Your excellent writing brought this story to life and I especially liked the character Mike-what a gem! If things like this could only happen in real life and where can you find a vintage pinball still in use these days, their action and sound is amazing! Keep writing - you do a great job with words! Thanks! :) Smiling Jaybird :)

You need an editor. You mixed up Mike and Frank in the latter part of the story. I enjoyed it very much and hope others feel the same but a mistake like that could cause confusion amongst the less discerning readers on Literotica.

This is really an excellently framed piece. I agree that you need more editing, but the plot and imagination and genuine feelings of the characters made it very enjoyable. Keep up the good work!

Thanks for sharing.

It reminded me of a funny happening about being carded and looking too young. My daughter was living in Philly and went to Delaware to visit her Uncle and cousins family. Her uncle enjoyed going to the horse races, she had never been so they went. He told her how to place a bet at the window. She told the lady what she wanted to bet on with uncle close by to help if needed. The lady said honey you have to be 18 to place a bet. Several people were watching. Uncle laughed and said mam let me introduce you to my niece Dr Laura _ several people gasp. She was in her 3rd or 4 year of residency as an MD.