by darkmaas
I don't get it.
Not only was it poorly written, it doesn't make much sense.
One question... Why?
i like the feel. i also like that it doesnt explain everything. we live in a world where every plot twist is explained, where characters are dissected for us. sometimes there are no answers. sometimes the why is not the substance--- thanks darkmaas
Wonderfully done. Darkmass got the European
curt, direct and a bit mysterious English down pat.
Like all good short stories, he conveys so much in
so few words. And the little details…the markings
the pine needles made”…”I was unclean” not “I felt
dirty”.
Couldn’t have been better.
shr