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by carrteun

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
The writing deserves a 5, but...

The writing is excellent and I truly appreciate your adherence to good grammar; however, the story itself was a bit of a downer. It was obvious from the beginning where the story was headed so the FFM scenes didn't resonate. I would have let the story go a little bit further before stopping. Let the sexual tension build between Tom and Sam, leaving your readers desperate for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sequel?

Please continue.

avp92117avp9211711 months ago

Well, that ended abruptly. Probably better to either drop the Samantha thing entirely, or finish it.

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