All Comments on 'Pinky Swear'

Can't wait until you write more on what happens next.

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I was planning on this being a one piece story, but I guess I can continue it...give me some ideas of what you'd like to read....

since she likes it rough, not to rough, show her submissive side. have him take her when she is fully dressed and in nylons when he comes home like on the dining room table or across the back of the couch

Lol no more.

you could continue on with her fantasy and liking of rough play by having him start to train her in bondage and submitting to becoming his submissive slave.

Since you had this as a one timer, maybe you could flesh it out some. Where's Dad? Is she divorced or just extra horny for her son. If Dad is in the picture, will he replace him? If she will be his "mommy slut" will others be brought in? Submissive? We know some of her fantasies, maybe they will act a few out.

Many possibilities to consider.

Since they live together, the next morning he should walk in on her taking a bath and tel her he would love it if she would shave her pubes. You can take it from there...

This was a great story Ribald! Really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing,

PS. I read the first part of Big Girl, and I'm enjoying that too!

I have come to enjoy these characters immediately. Perhaps it was taking the pan from the stove and placing it on the back porch. Subtle things in a story can communicate many things to any given set of readers. Please continue on when able.

Wonderful plot, good grammar, those little details that make the story 'real', it couldn't get better, or could it? What would it take for you to have his mom put her head back under the bed so that he can strip her naked and take unspeakable liberties with her? Please, please!

If she is 34 and he is 19 then according to this she became mother when he way 15! Yrs old and had sex when say 14 and lost her virginity at 13 huh!!! Really interesting ....

Enjoyed this story immensely looking forward to the next part.

I need part 2 already! Literally been reading literotica for years and never have posted tell now. Much need part 2 and some ass play for sure.

Very hot. Needs apart 2. The Pinky Swears Again.

Wish I could have caught my mom like that. Who knows where that could have led.

I hope you continue the story

Your mom stuck under the bed, it's a little hard to see. By the way, what was she,

looking for??, maybe a dildo. The read was ok, well done. THANKS

COCK TEASE STORY:-(

Good story she was 16 when She dropped her foal?

Damn, I would love to read the continuation of this story! Excellent job! 5stars

Munchie184

Dude. Duuuude. Uncool! Blue balls as fuck right now! Shit! Still have your damn 5 stars you bastard. Fuuuuck.

Eh! ***