All Comments on 'Piper's Descent Ch. 01'

Uhrm, could you consider making another? This one was great. Except that now I just want more. Evebroughtanaxthistime

hope there is more.

But far too short to be considered anything more than an opening.

enjoyed reading it

Came for the smut, stayed for the excellent story telling :)

I'm looking forward to future chapters !

I like it so far, please keep it coming, you have some talent

...well done so far...carry on!

Can't wait for part 2.

Really liked it but I am so so tired of reading something promising only to have it be annoyingly short and then it disappears or I forget it.

Nicely written, but this “chapter” ends before even having started properly.

Literotica is full with first pages/chapters of stories that never get finished, very tiresome, and it doesn't inspire confidence in your work.

You should after finishing this turn it into a full novel

I think it could definitely be good

Nicely started...a few little typos and grammatical errors, but it has a good hook. Please do continue.