by opels
I've been reading thru all of your stories, and quite enjoy them. This one has kept me pulled in since the first chapter! You're a great writer. The only thing that bothers me is that everything is very rushed. You went thru 2 months in this one page. I would like to see things in a bit more detail! Otherwise very well done
I will give you this, you are extremely talented, especially in the field of suspense. Please write again soon. You're killing me!
You can't end it like this make a happy ending! I hate sad endings they just depress the crap out of me.
this is a great little compilation and i love waiting for the next installment! keep writing!
The description of the fight etc. was splendid, I, don't know what you'll do, (I would like a happy end like the Lord of the manor..)
John