All Comments on 'Pittsburgh Women Ch. 02'

Your writting is better than some and quite erotic so please continue. The thing I did like best is your quick return on part 1. So many other authors make the public wait for too long and then the story becomes stale. This was a very good part 2 and keep up the good work.

Very sexy, yummy, story which gives the reader the impression that it was a narration of a true experience.

Good story, I wish it was a bit longer and lead up to the finale. I felt that it was a bit rushed. Mind you I couldn't do as good a job! Thanks.