All Comments on 'Pizazz'

Princess, you do an excellent job of setting up a scene! You write as if you were there--the proverbial "fly on the wall" kind of thing. Honey you are good. You obviously studied and did well in college. I like the way you write. It could be used for a good script!

Keep up the good work!

If I had read this before you put out part 2, I would have suggested a bummer date on his first trip, (with maybe some bad or indifferent sex) and then on his second trip, meet the girl with the OGG in mind! But I am too late---I'll just have to read part 2 and see what you came up with!