by JKendallDane
That 3 times in a row blowjob scene was fucking awesome. Probably one of the best I have ever read here. Whoever ends up with pizza boy best have a good sex drive and great stamina. LOL
I love this series but why do you keep shifting POV? It's an unnecessary distraction from an otherwise hot read!
I liked the chapter; it was fairly well written and was extremely hot. I hope his friend from back home falls for him. Those two would be a fine couple.
This is THE BEST Gay ERotic Story Ever!! I Cant Stop Caring (& Being Envious!) Of Josh & Gotta KNOW WHat Happens Next!!
Love FREE
I wish Josh was real he seems awesome and I'm kinda jealous because Josh gets every like he gets everythingand all the sexual exploits that he is having I want those and is like a yes I just mm yeah so bad I was just as real and all his foot so I can meet him talk to them he give me tips lol
It has a good plot and characters but spelling mistakes such as thru kills the mood. Also when you write pre instead of precum makes it feel like mistakes. Also what POV is it, it says Josh then it says I.