All Comments on 'Pizza Boy at the Door Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I am so hard now

That 3 times in a row blowjob scene was fucking awesome. Probably one of the best I have ever read here. Whoever ends up with pizza boy best have a good sex drive and great stamina. LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I love this series but why do you keep shifting POV? It's an unnecessary distraction from an otherwise hot read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Casey 1988

I liked the chapter; it was fairly well written and was extremely hot. I hope his friend from back home falls for him. Those two would be a fine couple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More About Josh!

This is THE BEST Gay ERotic Story Ever!! I Cant Stop Caring (& Being Envious!) Of Josh & Gotta KNOW WHat Happens Next!!

Love FREE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Yes I need to know more

I wish Josh was real he seems awesome and I'm kinda jealous because Josh gets every like he gets everythingand all the sexual exploits that he is having I want those and is like a yes I just mm yeah so bad I was just as real and all his foot so I can meet him talk to them he give me tips lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I LIKE IT

It has a good plot and characters but spelling mistakes such as thru kills the mood. Also when you write pre instead of precum makes it feel like mistakes. Also what POV is it, it says Josh then it says I.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I wish i was josh

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Just a regular guy that's gay and enjoys writing as a serious hobby. My stories will almost always be same-sex-oriented and tend to run more towards the romance and/or the first-time genres with the occasional foray into the drama or mystery areas. I do occasionally pop off a ...