All Comments on 'Pizza Boy at the Door Ch. 16'

Still say Josh needs to hookup with the "dorm jock" for the sex of a lifetime. His inner wild stud needs to be released!

Another great chapter. I thank you:) but seriously anonymous? Maybe if it had happened before he met Kyle fine but never now. This is love and would you cheat on someone you love? Besides Kyle and Josh seem pretty hot and heavy anyway.

Kyle and Josh have to remain committed to each other. Please dont let either of them ever play around except with each other! This is too sweet a love story to have that happen. Just one other request. Please keep the chapters coming!!!

I loved the chapter. ^-^ I think it is amazing that these two are able to turn down other offers; it shows that Josh and Kyle are truly a deep couple.

Great writing! I actually wanted to read the next line for the building sexual energy between the characters. Definitely getting a 5 star from me!