All Comments on 'Pizza Boy Sissy Pt. 01'

by BluntSlut

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

From the way you are telling the story Sam willingly wants to be a girl from the intro to your story. I think it could slowly be built up to having Sam (A departure from your last story and other stories like that) be Kevin's trophy girl with consent. Can this one story of yours be special in its own way that stands out. It is just my opinion on what I think, cause I do like this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Fun short story

Guys watching porn together often leads to more fun. A goal can be achieved if one places themselves in the right situations. It can happen for you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A more poetic review!

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WROTE A FUCKING MESS!

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WITH JIZZ HE IS OBSESSED!

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HIS TALES ARE SO CRASS!

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WOULD FLUNK A WRITING CLASS!

BrendaNWBrendaNWalmost 9 years ago
Nice start

I think you have a nice start, please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
oh my

A ten inch dick, I would have given him the hundred.

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