All Comments on 'Pizza in the Buff'

Great, great story. I really enjoyed it. It was sexy, but believable.

I don't if I belive the plot line with Marge, but it was interesting.

I would have liked the story to continue, but that isn't going to happen.

It was a great story and I really good story!!

That was an awesome story, thank you!!

Even if just a story. Thanks for writing this!

I agree with Sue43 about the sadness of a dying town. With manufacturing gone offshore, and industrialized farming, the future is urban. Much as I appreciate big city dynamics, so much is being lost.

This was a wonderful little fantasy and very well written. I don't know if I believe that these young kids could actually get away with delivering pizza in the buff without any of them having any bad experiences, but maybe I'm just cynical. I don't think we live in a world quite that innocent, but it would be nice if we did.

I never understood why the powers that be always want to censor nudity from movies and television but allow for the depiction of murder, bloody violence, and even torture. The human body is beautiful and some of the most revered artwork ever created celebrated that beauty because it stood for innocence and purity of form. Too many people associate nudity with pornography even though there is a world of difference between the two. And, yes, nudity can lead to sex; but, sex between two people who love and appreciate each other brings a closeness to a relationship that cannot be matched by anything else. There are too many people in this world that are like Marge and cannot get past what they were taught by uptight, supposedly moral parents that nudity is sinful. Turn a blind eye if you wish, but allow me to choose what I believe to be right for me. If only...

Roger

by LeBaron1987 on 07/01/2017

That was a very enjoyable story.

You have a great writing style and the colorful phrases and images are wonderfully represented. Please keep writing!!

A well written tale and something that is very believable to occur. As someone has previously said surprising no one had a bad experience delivering but that is not what the story was about and you stuck well to the nude day theme. Only thing off putting for me was the mix of pizza and pie being delivered. In Australia a pie is something very different to a pizza and are never referred to as one of them being the other so it got a bit mixed up there for me. That said loved reading it and will certainly check some of your other work as I like your writing style. Hopefully it will give me some inspiration to put my first story online.

very believable, small businesses go out of business like crazy nowadays. we have a few local diners and restaurants but all the mom and pop shops are long gone and some of the restaurants seem to be going that way, if you want a working appliance within thirty minutes of where i live you need to go to walmart or target or order online, we have a lowes and menards but they don't carry appliances much beyond sinks. and i live in a place where the local high school has over two thousand students although it's fairly religious because indiana. I don't think it would work well here because religion tends to be overjudgy. I do love the subversion of tropes though because in stories about pizza delivery it's almost always the pizza dare where the person who ordered the pizza is naked to fulfill an exhibiotinist tendency, although i think it would be a pain to get an operation like this up and running, the group was lucky one of them was the sheriff's son because if the police refuse to enforce it hardly matters what laws are written down and i believe there are multiple laws that would make this type of operation nearly impossible, i don't feel like writing down what those laws are though,. loved the story i can't believe you got beat by in the buff or stealing is the ultimate gift although vacation 195 was pretty excellent and i still have five more of the nude day stories on my to read list