All Comments on 'Plain Janie'

Very GOOD story. I loved it so much! Happy Valentines Day!

Nice job.. good luck in the contest

not a fan of incest stories at all, but have to admit you are a very good writer.

Amazing story. Not the usual unsubtle sex, but the charecters were built up so I could almost believe it was real.

Involving (but still with the lust firmly in-place) and well-paced. I like the build-up, the ethical plays involved, and the characterizations. Great work! Thanks for sharing your talents.

Thanks for another great story!

Really put me in the Valentine's mood.

It was a really good read. Much appreciated.

Top marks for a super, warm tale of sibling love with an 'understanding' stepbrother thrown in for good measure! Yes it was incest, but it seemed the right thing considering the obvious deep feelings they had for each other. Well done - looking forward to more great stories from you.

and much better than the typical incest fare at lit. Good for you!

I really did not want to like this story, but you gave me no choice.

There are no plain Janes. Just women who haven't been seen by the "right" person yet. SO what if the right person was her bro. All bets are off when a life time of happiness is at stake. That works for me...

I read alot of stories on here, and i must say yors is the best so far, not just your typical incest story, but body, climax and a happy ending. Awesome job and well done. I hope to see more stories from you in the future.

This was a really good tale. I think sibling incest tales are the best, especially when they turn into romantic love stories like this one did.

I don't think you ever really hear incest stories described as cute, but that's exactly what this was. It was also very well written and very entertaining.

What a great story - it was beautifully written and the ending was clear - True love overcomes all - lets have some more of this couple and how the relationship continues - Thanks

G'Day,

Ch2, at the steakhouse, Jane "..... slaughterhouse in the middle of nowhere. I want to know you're (sic) agenda".

Having now read a few of your stories, I was a bit shocked at that slip.

It really is a beautiful love story.

Thank you.

Very well written and extremely enjoyable. The pacing of storytelling was very nice.

I love this.

I rather loved this story! I think that because of the framework you've chosen for this story, a novella format would have given a more appropriate pace, but, this is still amazing!

Hope that one day you return.

i loved this story so much i hope you make a sequel to this

I am right along with the other commentators who loved your wonderful story,

Sorry I didn't get to vote for it but as usual I am late again.

Definitely a well deserved 5*

such a lovely lil story

DKP

loved the last line

What a great story! A very good read

I agree that it was a very good story, one of the best's I've read but I think Jane should have found out that Craig had been the one that gave her the little lion, you know to help her relise her feelings for him. Such as Harvey looking at his name written on it and saying that it had been written in Craig's handwriting or something along that line, or that she herself relise that it had been Craig that gave it to her. Just saying it would have added more to the story...at least to me would have.