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All Comments on 'Planet of the Dino-whores Ch. 03'

by 100 Angry Bananas

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Talk about your sarcastic comments.

That last line was absolutely perfect. "This can't end well." I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Get an editor.

You are a pretty decent writer, but things like "balanced precariously at the edge of climax and relief, and then she over." just will not appear in GOOD writing.

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