Play it Again Sam Pt. 04

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Now I was really confused. I thought the flash was part of my time loop, but now it seemed it was tied to New York somehow.

It became the focal point of my day. I was just killing time to get to 4:58am and 26 seconds.

I moved around, trying to see what difference my location made. I saw the flash no matter where I was in New York's five Burroughs, but the farther I got from Manhattan, the... dimmer it felt. I didn't see it at all in New Jersey.

The problem was that I was still ending my days indoors. I was either in a hotel if I was alone, or in a club or bar if I was with others.

One night I decided to go outside at the end of the day. That made the difference.

Now, the flash still only lasted a fraction of a second, but when I was outdoors, I could definitely tell that there was a direction to it.

I went back to Trenton and was sitting in the courtyard of my hotel at 4:58. I hadn't expected to see anything, but there it was. Very faint, from the north. I'd only seen it because I wasn't inside.

The next night, I rented the penthouse suite of the tallest hotel in Trenton. At 4:58 I was on the balcony, looking towards New York.

...

Friday July 15 th , 2016 Day 1403

"What is love? Baby don't hurt me....don't hurt me....no more"

I slowly sat up in bed.

I finally knew what happened at 4:58 and 26 seconds every day.

It had been over fast, a fraction of a second. It was so quick, it was more impression than memory. But I knew what I had seen...

A mushroom cloud.

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Punishing the guilty IS the moral response!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Unfortunately its another story where the wife is just having affairs because she can even though she loves the MC and her life will be 'over' if he finds out. Now I don't deny this happens, I suspect mostly with younger people and one night stands, I just think this trope is fixated upon by writers in Loving Wives, because the discovery of the affair and after effects hurts them more than if they're happy to bail. It's far more likely that a medium/long term affair, especially one that involves risk taking (sex at home) is an affair that is waiting for the other partner to leave their wife, or get ducks in a row. Or, it's a mental health issue, which by all accounts should be treated like any other illness ... though I appreciate that men tend to bail on their wives when they discover they're seriously ill anyway.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Huh

Now nuclear?

How about a dozen

DeanofMeanDeanofMeanabout 1 year ago

Ok you said you were not going to let this go on forever i don't mind so far one of the best handling of the theme I have seen in a very long time

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I don't understand... why beat down the doctor?... he was just one of many who got seduced into his wifes bed... there was very little reason to take it out on him and let his cheating traitorous wife virtually go scott-free with a simple and quick divorce... some really screwed up dysfunctional thinking going on here. ⭐⭐

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