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All Comments on 'Play Nice with Your Toys'

by TheRedheadedSlut

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Not at all bad.

A hot and sexy, if very short story. Well done for conveying so much in so few words, but please note - 'nice' is incorrectly used an an adverb; it should be 'nicely'.

Apart from that, a good read. Four stars.

fitntrimfitntrimover 11 years ago
Hot

Thanks for the heat, just my type of story!

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