All Comments on 'Play Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
well played

This was awesome and promising, and then .... the ending happened and i nearly fell off my chair laughing.

Poor 'Biri'!

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Hi, guys! I am Venom. I'm a twenty-something from Europe, writing short stories and narrations (erotic and non-erotic) under this pen name for several years now. Some can be found here on literotica. Alternatively, you may want to look at "venomstories.wordpress.com".