All Comments on 'Playdates'

I read your bio and was expecting something tame. But your description of a growing erection was really hot! You have a great deliberate well-paced style. You feel at ease in writing erotica, so the matter-of-fact style makes if all the hotter. Hope you do more.

Beautiful story. Wonderfully erotic. Loved it. Write more, please.

Beautifully done.

Beautifully written

Incredible

Magnificent

Wonderful

Superlatives fail me.

My comments cannot do justice to your story

The pacing, the imagery... very well done/

You captured the interior dimension of this connection very well. Extremely graphic but with almost no focus on the surface of the lovers.