All Comments on 'Playing Doctor with Student Escort'

Hi,

I read the saga of Claire, the student escort. It’s nice.

The story is an adaptation of the real world life of some College/University students. This happens in any city, town, country (at least in the Western Hemisphere.

A few comments:

1.- be more careful with the details of the story (names, descriptions, typos, ...)

2.- if it is going to be a series, make it easy to follow (name it the same way and indicate the sequence of chapters/episodes

3.- don’t end the episode abruptly, no matter if you want to have a continuation or is a self contained story

In general is a good idea, needs more attention, it seems like it’s written in a hurry.

There’s so much more that can be added to the story. Add more episodes. Maybe add another student, include a scandal, a jealous guy blackmailing her, a stalker...

Keep them “cuming”.