All Comments on 'Playing the Part'

This is one story that should have died in the author's computer.

Liked it very much. A well written, well thought out storyline.

I enjoyed your story ignore the trolls.

Well written, I loved it

Please ignore the trolls, indeed

Let them come up with a better story, and react with a username instead of anon

I Loved the story!

I really enjoyed this story, and felt the change in writing reflected the different perspectives excellently

Porn girls are disgusting. I can't believe he didn't vomit. What a waste.

"It's worth it. It's all worth it. I wouldn't trade it for the world."

It IS worth it, or it WAS worth it?

I know you were currently in the past tense, making it "was worth it", but in the body of your story, you should avoid using contractions for the sole purpose of disambiguation.

Hope this tip proves to be useful in the future.

Definitely ignore the trolls! They have no clue what a good story is.

Loved the story, but I have to admit that I skipped the entire "Alex's Story". While I'm sure it outlined her feelings toward her father, as a reader I already knew that nothing would come of her attraction until the part of the story that I had already read in the beginning, so to me it was just "background story" and not pertinent to the erotic part. I mean, you had already led me, as a reader, to the climactic conclusion of their intimacy, so what point in reading about what had led her there? I could fill in any blanks with my own imagination if I wanted to. Like I said, I loved it, so I hope you can take that as constructive criticism for whatever it's worth.

You lost me at the part where he didn't recognize his own daughter. I simply lost interest there.

Otherwise it was pretty interesting.

And he totally should have turned in his dirt-bag coworker for the attempted blackmail. Simply walking away like that was about an unmanly as it gets.

Loved it! Are there any men out there like that, I'd really like to find 1. Ah thank god for literotica 😉