All Comments on 'Playing with Katie'

Depends on your purpose, but if you're wanting to create a relationship between these two, it felt very rushed. If your purpose is simply sex, it was fine.

Looking forward to seeing the next chapter :)

Good premise. It would have been more erotic to draw out the interaction between them at work - flirting, etc. before jumping straight to getting together in the bathroom. More seduction.

Looks very promising.

Thanks for your story I'm going to be interested to see how it develops. I think you have great potential as a writer. I urge you to use the resources available on Literotica to hone your skills. Good luck. ChristieP

Great start! Can't wait to read, at least, a sequel, if not as series. Sounds like Em and Katie, and us have a lot to look forward, too.

I hope there's more to come!