All Comments on 'Playing with My Man's Ass after Work'

Only one thing: from "I manage to get you on your knees with your face in the pillows" to "I begin to pump your cock in my mouth" I missed something.

Author should probably have mentioned her body position, i.e., underneath him with his clock in her mouth as she works the vibrator in his ass. Clarity is nice, but a careful reader gets the picture! Excellent fun, more please?!

I thought it was pretty awesome. good job.

CALM DOWN GUYS, I know the story is poorly written, I wrote it over 8 years ago. I was 18 and had a naughty pen pal. I'm so glad to see everyone so passionate about their erotic reading though! Be kind, there are more stories to come written by me in the present-day! :)

"Calm down guys" seems less appropriate here to the same comment made on the other story (Passionate Fuck on the Couch) by the same author. The three reader comments here were favourable.

Mine wouldn't have been if I had read the story, and for the same reason that I commented less-than-favourably on the other story -- second-person narration doesn't work well for me with erotic stories.

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Pegging with passion. I loved it. Only problem was it was too short. That's a good criticism to have.