All Comments on 'Plaything Pt. 03'

And with racism. Your hate Indians, right. I get it. Your must be a shitty low-life white trash douchbag. All you can do is write up shitty racist stories like this, cause you cant anything else in life. Live in your fantasy land, racist scumbag!!

I don't usually respond to comments but this story was called "racist" by a recent comment and I want to set the record straight. I AM Indian. Half-Indian and half-black actually, so unless I could be that and still be a " white trash douchbag" then I apologize. This story is just a fantasy, and raceplay is just a kink. I write what I like, if you don't like it, read something else. I'm proud of my heritage, but that doesn't mean I don't like this sort of raceplay. That is all.

Great story so far - nothing wrong with race play - ignore what others say! Plus, there is some truth to it if you ask me..

Some suggestions for part 4:

- how about a white man bukkake?

- to be truly submissive she should eat the two white boys’ asses

- similarly she should great them by kissing/licking their feet

- while the husband is gone the white boys can properly take over the house, locks changed, all property title hand over and the son turned into a house servant/slave. The husband will be forced to finance the whole thing

Man this is great. All the three parts are fantastic. There should be one with how it all started like plaything pt 0.

I'm already writing a blowbang for part 4 and a prequel chapter is on its way :)

who claims to be proud of his heritage and writes fantasies about people of his own race getting humiliated. LOL!! I known people like you who suffer from low-self esteem and can't decide for what actually you want. White ass licking Indian!!

im an Asian and i love this story . hope u put in it more details conversation of the whore mom with the boys and plz dont get that father involve ( just my opinion ). keep it up bro . thank you so much .

love the story so far really good but wud love to see the bullys beating up the boy while fucking the mother and she enjoys it. I t wud b awsome also seeing mother disowning her son calling him foul names and also she tells him how she didnt want him as a baby.

This much is fine. Otherwise it would sound sick and repulsive. And make the son get revenge on the trashy dumb white guys with no brains submitting to an intellectual Indian boy who then kicks each and everyone's ass. Make white trash story line and turn it into revenge. That would be good

Hey,

Eagerly waiting for the new story to come out. Make the son do even more, like cleaning up the mom's ass after a good fuck.

Surely this guy is a faggot white boy who is hiding his inadequacies in the form of being dominant over indians. Probably this guys mom married an Indian guy and is ashamed of giving birth to an inferior white trash like him and constantly curses her vagina that it pushed out a scum like him into his this world.

She probably wants to have better babies with successful and better men than the regular white trash in this world. And what better than good successful, well educated, rich talented brown Indian men, or even Middle eastern or Black.

So keep living in this bubble of yours as your women are leaving you. Even your mother is disgusted to have a carried a white faggot sissy like in her womb for 9 months.

yo just because you feel inferior reading about big white dick doesn't mean you have to talk bad about whites....How much bbc porn is out there...give whites a fair trade as many have huge cocks...many are bigger than black men... I shuld know I was a snowbunny till a white cobk turned me back to the light

Dude, ignore these idiots! I hope you keep writing! I really hope you write a nice prequel about how Priya became the submissive she is. Most of all never apologize for your kinks and what you enjoy! You aren't hurting anyone on here!

Good going man. Let the prequel and sequel be published on the site as soon as possible.

Love the stories...just waiting to read the following parts. Keep up the good work!

Your mom must have never loved you in real life. Also so many other real life losers here asking for more of this trash. Too many mentally ill shitheads who enjoy this type of trash.

Superb story bro

Nows a very good time for Part 4 mate.

Can't wait to read another story of yours...

Are you still planning on writing more? It are other writers here willing to continue to story?

Amazing story we need more, carry on the Humiliation side of the story

Love it..keep it coming..

Hi, love this totally owned plaything!! Any similar stories or continuation? Is there a way for me to contact you?

Good to know the author is dead.