All Comments on 'Please Watch Me'

by Catcherintheride

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savage4xsavage4xover 6 years ago
Very Good

A sexy, tightly written story, really enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing x

bear2readbear2readover 6 years ago
Rigidly erotic

This was so hot! Both characters described in great detail and you captured the voyeur’s mental state perfectly as well as Clair’s.

Can’t wait to see how this progresses.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 6 years ago
Great story

I did not know if Claire was just an exhibitionist galore, or if she were simply making a play for Andy, or both, until of course at the very end, when all became clear. The tension in the story was delicious. Five stars from me. JB

ManosHandsManosHandsover 6 years ago
Great!

This is the first story I've read of yours and I'm already hooked. Well written - great job.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very nice

A part 2 maybe? Alot left to explore

xiabxiabover 6 years ago
Essence of the category

Hot. I wish the tease had gone on longer Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Are you En_Extase? These Seem to be from "Waking Up to Dawn"

The story seemed awfully familiar. I went hunting...the shower scene is from Chapter IV. The couch sex scene is from Chapter VI.

HardBenHardBenover 6 years ago
FABULOUS

Brilliantly written erotic story.

Great descriptive work and every man's dream.

Just loved Andy watching Clair, and could visualise every detail.

Can't wait to hear what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Repetitious

I know I've read this story before - and it wasn't written by you. 0 stars for that kind of behaviour.

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

PLEASE WATCH ME by Catcherintheride is a masterfully done erotic story, a tour de force!

5***** (4.85 = 97%, ♡♡♡♡♡)

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

👍👍

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