by spider007
Mindless drivel. Just a slut Not erotic in the least
Story and writer zippo nana zero space void nothing all zeros on a check . You may not be worth the bullet for suicide.
Have you even had sex? With a real woman? I only ask because you seem to have no idea how a womans body reacts. From a prolapsed rectum from too much use to industrial sized lube because a woman can't produce fluid indefinately to STDs and in planned pregnancy to cervical cancer...well, you get the picture. Your "ideal" woman only exists as a rubber doll. Bit you are to stupid and inexperienced to know that.
Great story. Nothing wrong with sharing the wife. As long as everyone is happy, why not pass the wife around. I know all the guys that fuck her certainly are happy.
Keep them coming, both the guys and stories LOLOL
Your writing is hot! Keep at it and don't listen to the losers who knock your work. There are plenty of fans out there who are waiting for the next chapter!
'More' is actually OFTEN 'less'! Certainly true in this case. What is in store for slave Sweetie next? Finishing prize for all the men and women and donkeys completing the Boston Marathon? Then as a 'Welcome' hostess for a group of horny Martians invading Earth?
This story is WAY over the top. The commenter who suggested this relationship would best be conducted with a rubber doll is IMHO right on target!
I doubt you can even get your dick hard, and you write this type garbage to try and get off, which I very much doubt. Please leave the story telling to some one else. You are nothing but a big faggot. Eat shit and die.
You go too far in your stories. I noticed it in other of your stories.