by Sonatatre
Oh well that was quite interesting but not very arousing, i would like to know, if you're going to do another sequel, what dose the husband/father will think of all this. will you make him a simp or will he be standing his grounds. Anyway Great read, looking foward to the next installment.Till then, Have a good Day/Night.
...leave dad out of it.
I'd like you to explore their feelings more - All of a sudden lesbian? Incest? Group sex? Porn? Pregnancy? You've touched on the pregnancy aspect. My guess is that you are holding back the 'special' powers of the futa - brainwashing - physical enhancement (how else do normal women/girls handle monster appendages?). Being a little cagey huh? Love the story. Work on using contractions more - Americans find that style more readable.
1). I’ll second what someone else said, focus on the girls. Youve got a number of themes in th air and I really think focusing your energy on them instead of adding another element is the way to go.
2) Youre doing a great job at discribing what is happening and what is going on in their head. I do note you don’t really give physical discriptions. While I don’t think giving detail portraits of everyone, mentioning hair color/style/color or some other physical would gives a little more individuality to everyone.
3). Write quicker! ;)
"Hello, I am home," Sarah called in a brusque teenage way." "I am a slut" "we are going..."
Your story is filled with this very formal manner of speech, and that's not the way people talk in casual conversation. They say, "I'm home" or "he'll go" "We're going..." etc etc. Your dialogue is very distracting.
Julie should get Sarah pregnant too. Get her pregnant before Leah gets Linda pregnant, as revenge for losing in the riding competition in this chapter.
so good does lindas hubby find out about the loan and how does he like the fact that linda lets leah knock her up really like youe stories
Love the futanari and incest themes that are presented here. I’m not the biggest fan of pregnancy stories, but I was able to overlook it here due to the strength of the overall story. The only thing that would have made things hotter is if Julie and Leah got involved with each other. Looking forward to a continuation for sure!
I've been wanting forever to see a story on here about a hot milf getting knocked up by a teenaged futa.
Please do more on Julie and Leah using Sarah.
That would be fucking hot.
This series is awesome!
BUT!
I'd love to read more about Sarah being USED by JULIE more.
Please make more about Julie and Sarah. Pleeeeeeeeease. There are so few older futa on teenage female stories. I would love it to death!
I'd love to read more about Julie using Sarah in bizarre and interesting situations or just plain treating her like a c*m dump.
Please make some offshoot stories about Julie and Sarah. I'd love to read more about the hot coupling of an older futa mother coupling with a young teenage girl.
Irrespective, I love this series. Please continue! Personally I feel you should leave the father out of this, he'd only make it boring imo.
Please make off shoot stories about Julie and Sarah. Pleeeeeeeeease.
This story overall was nice, but imo, a bit more empahsis on the futa mother on daughter would make it a thousand times hotter.
Outstanding. Love the Milf/Teen dynamic. Especially the increasing depravity that Linda experiences when exposed to futa cock. This story needs to continue.
MORE chapters Please! MORE Leah & Linda!!! I want to see them fall ravenously in love to match their lust. And yes, please also have Sarah get pregnant with Julie's baby so mom and daughter can be pregnant together mmm! The Sooner the Better :)
After over 30 months since chapter 2, you're not going to finish this, are you ?
This story needs to be taken to the next stage and give us the details of Leah getting Linda pregnant.
Please add more chapters!
I am so curious to see if Leah has any affection for Linda, or is getting Linda Pregnant another notch in Leah's bedpost.
Also who is responsible for the theft in Linda's Husbands company? If the futanari are involved the 'explosion' would be huge.
Amazing story. Extremely hot, was hard the entire time. Really hope there is more to story coming soon.
It was fucking great I have just been turned on to the futa world took me a few to figure it out and now I love it this is the best sex story I've ever read please dont stop writing about Linda and Susan I want ti see if Linda gets pregnant from Leaha
It was a great story I wish you would finish it I see where it's been a while since you wrote any more please dont keep us hanging on
OMG... I was soaking wet through the entire story. My one thought is how much time did Linda and Sarah spend between each others legs later on, or even the other girls... and mothers.
A 5-star story. I do not know what the big deal was with Leah having sex with daughters. I guess no one``` though of birth control? Will she and Leah live together? Will Linda's marriage survive? Will Julie get Sarah pregnant? Will all 4 wind up living together as a family?
I definitely want to read more of this. It's really hot and I hope you'll write atleast a couple more long chapters.
I would also like to read a few more chapters of this very hot and erotic story of a wife/mother and daughter into the decadent world of porn and sexual surrender.
Loved the stories. Being futa, why didn't you take advantage of the futas' pussies?