Pleasure Package (Illustrated Ver.)

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Sub comes home to unhappy Sir, earns spanking & humiliation.
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Updated 11/01/2022
Created 05/10/2014
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I stick my key into the lock. The light flashes green, and I hear the familiar bzzzt of the electronic lock popping open. I step into your apartment.

"Hi! Sorry I'm late, I got caught up finishing something at work," I say.

You're sitting on a couch next to the window. Your jet-black hair is combed into perfect waves, and the muscles in your arms and chest strain your button down shirt. You look up from your computer.

"There's a package for you on the bed, " you say, your green brown eyes stare at my face, unblinking.

I slip off my shoes, running my finger down the tip of my instep. I feel your gaze on me.

I walk into the bedroom, and notice a package wrapped in red paper on the bed.

"Shit," I mutter. I bought the little vibrator I know is inside the package a while ago, I'd forgotten it was coming today. I meant to get home before you found it in the mailbox.

I feel your warm breath on my neck as you walk up behind me.

"Shall I take it you've been feeling bored?" you ask.

"No! Not when you're around at least."

You walk around me and look down at me. "So I take it you've been pleasuring yourself when I'm not here. Even though that's against the rules."

"Uh well, you know, if it's just a necessity its not really...pleasuring, right?"

Your gaze is intense. Despite your serious expression, I know you're smiling somewhere inside, you're always amused by my horny-ness.

"Kneel," you direct.

I lower myself to the floor shakily. Our play sessions are always planned. Usually finite spaces of time carefully separated from the rest of life, aside from the no masturbating rule that you use to maximize my sensitivity. Clearly, today is going to be different.

"Hands behind your back."

My oversized 32F tits strain against the fabric of my dress. My knees dig into the slight scratch of the carpet, and I look up at you with large dark eyes. My curly dark hair tumbles to each side of my breasts, and I pout slightly, cocking my head at you. Wanting to appear both coy and supple, awaiting your command, but not necessarily ready to give in.

"Well, aren't you confident. What, you think I'm just going to give you more pleasure, after you show that clearly you can't even follow one simple rule, designed for your own happiness?"

I remain silent. You squat down in front of me. You extend your hand, and brush the right side of my hair back.

You lean forward, and whisper in your ear, your breath softly tickling me, "listen carefully now, my horny little minx, there are four rules tonight:

  1. you may call me sir, and only call me sir for the remainder of the night.

  2. Whenever I command you to do something, reply with a "yes sir".

  3. you may not cum until I give you permission to do so

  4. you may not moan or make any noise of pleasure unless I command you to do so"

"Shall we get started?"

I nod.

"Yes sir, should be the response," you say, frowning at me.

"Yes sir," I reply.

"Good. Get down on all fours, now. Lets get that flat little ass on display," you say, your voice dropping even deeper.

"Yes sir," I reply. Placing my hands on the floor.

"Now, I'm not sure you even deserve a spanking, given how much pleasure you get out of having your ass slapped," you say, as you lean down to caress my buttocks, "Plus, I doubt you could keep from moaning."

You continue rubbing my ass, and I start to squirm back into your hand. A slight moan escapes my lips. Shit.

"What ever shall we do with you?" you ask, "you can't even keep from moaning when I barely touch you."

Slap. I jump forward. Where did the riding crop come from? I think to myself.

Swoosh. Slap. Swoosh. Slap. You continue to whip me with the riding crop, making me arch and dip my back in time with your strokes. As the stinging begins to grow, I try to wiggle away, but you hold my hips firm with your large hands.

"No moving."

"Yes sir."

After another minute of cropping, I find myself starting to get wet. I think you must know, because you stand up and walk over to the toy box.

"Thank me each time I slap you with this paddle," you say, turning to show me the heavy, black silicone paddle in your hand.

I look up at you, wide eyed, as you walk around me.

"Yes sir."

Twack. You hit me. Hard. My stomach rolls; how embarrassing to have to thank you for this.

"I'm waiting," you say, as you caress my ass with the paddle.

I open and close my mouth a few times. Finally the words escape, a mere note above a whisper, "thank you."

"I can't hear you, little one, what did you say."

"Thank you," I say, a bit louder.

"You're forgetting something, aren't you?"

"Thank you, sir."

"Better."

Twack.

"Thank you, sir."

Twack "Thank y-." Twack.

"Faster," you snap. My cheeks flush; usually I'm the one telling you to hurry up.

"Yes sir, thank you, sir," I reply, beginning to grow red with embarrassment. You continue, alternating your blows with my thanks. My pussy is beginning to feel warm and wet. It's becoming hard not to let a moan escape whenever I open my mouth to thank you.

Mercifully, you stop.

"Alright," you say, "sit up and squeeze those tits like the dirty little girl you are."

"Yes sir."

"Now, tell me why your ass is spanked red, and why you're sitting in front of me like this."

"I don't know," I reply. I look up at you coyly, testing you, as I set my hands back on the floor.

"Hands squeezing your boobs, NOW. And, you better have a good response, unless you want my riding crop on your bare ass."

I hate that damn crop.

"Because I'm horny, " I say quietly.

"I couldn't quite hear you, but I think you said because you're a horny little cunt, isn't that right?"

"Yes sir."

"I'm glad we agree. Now then, off with that dress: unzip yourself."

"Yes sir."

I turn my back to you, reach around, and slide my zipper down.

To be continued...

My dress drops to the floor. I stand still; the cool breeze of the air conditioner tickles my nipples into erection. My breath catches as you run your hand down the curve of my waist, and around to cup my ass.

"Now, why don't you bend that flat little ass of yours over, and --" you say.

I whip my head around to glare at you.

"What, did I insult you? It is flat, perhaps if you worked on plumping it up instead of pleasing yourself, you wouldn't be in this little predicament," you reply, "in any case bend over, and hold on to the footboard."

My breath catches in my throat. This is spanking is about to make earlier look mild.

"Oh please, don't pretend to be scared, you know you love getting spanked, don't you, my little pain slut?"

I grunt.

"Aren't you forgetting to say something?" you ask me.

"Yes sir."

"Yes sir, what?"

"Yes sir, I do like getting spanked."

"There's a good girl, now bend over, and don't move until I tell you to do so."

Your bare hand slaps my panty-covered ass. I jolt forward slightly.

You rub my ass, tickling just slightly, sending a rush of warmth to my cunt. You stop rubbing and begin a steady assault of smacks on my ass. I begin to grind back into your hand, wriggling with pleasure. Suddenly, you stop.

"Pull your panties down just to the bottom of your ass. It's time for a paddling," you say.

I shake my head, and stay still. I'm not going to give you the satisfaction of seeing me pull down my panties for a hard paddling like a contrite child.

"Slut. Pull. Down. Your. Panties."

I remain motionless.

"I'm going to ask you one more time...pull your panties DOWN. NOW."

Again, I am still.

Twack

Your palm comes straight up between my legs, landing on my unsuspecting and soaking wet cunt.

Twack

Your palm collides with my cunt again, this time the heel of your hand is positioned to dig into my clit causing maximum pain.

"I'm sorry. Please," I gasp, yanking down my panties.

You step back, and I can feel your gaze boring into my ass.

"Not good enough," you snap, "strip and kneel. Quickly."

I straighten myself, legs slightly quivering. I push my panties the rest of the way down and kick them off, simultaneously reaching back to unclasp the three clamps of my 32F bra.

I drop to my knees and look up at you.

You stare down at me. I'm intensely aware of my stiff nipples. The ticking clock, the wetness between my legs that is dripping onto my inner thigh.

"Lay down," you command.

Confused I sit down and stretch out my legs and roll my back onto the prickly carpet.

"Roll over onto your stomach."

"Now, lift up your ass and stretch out your arms in a prostrating position, as if you're actually repentant for your bad behavior."

You step forward and place your feet on top of my outstretched hands. My cheeks flush red with embarrassment. I know you can see the bud of my asshole as well as my dangling breasts. I'm helpless in front of you, unable to move now that you've pinned my hands to the floor.

You pick something up from the bed, and I shiver as you drag the thick silicone paddle along my spine.

Smack.

The paddle lands firmly on my buttocks. My body lurches forward with nowhere to go.

"Back in position, slut," you say.

Smack. Smack. Smack...

Your spanking begins to take on a hard painful rhythm. Every so often, you swirl the paddle around my ass.

"Please, sir, please," I cry out as the paddling begins to sting.

"Please, what, do you want me to stop?"

I do, but I don't, you're hurting me, but you're sending to me to that place between pain and pleasure. I can't help but wriggle my ass back, wanting more of your paddle, and I can't help but cry and jump away wanting less. Every stroke sending both pleasure and pain rattling through my brain.

"That what I thought," you say. I know if I could see your face, you would be wearing that smug, all-knowing grin.

Involuntarily I begin humping back into the paddle. I'm beyond the point of embarrassment; I'm ready for this pain-and-pleasure mix to turn into pure pleasure.

Suddenly, you stop.

I whimper.

"Shh, I'm certainly not done with you yet," you tell me.

You drop the paddle next to me with a thud. Stepping off of my hands, you walk around behind my ass. You kneel behind me and reach forward. The index finger of your hand slides across my pubic bone and over my clit. I cry out in ecstasy. You slide your finger further through the wetness of my slit, and then back, wresting the pad of your finger beneath the hood of my clit.

You begin to move your finger, pressing directly against my clit in small circles. I cry out, again and again. As you continue, my cries become whimpers as your finger causes my body to reach pleasure overload. I grind back on you in an attempt to cum, despite the too-much intensity of the direct stimulation. Once again, you suddenly stop.

"Still can't control yourself, I see," you growl.

"Go lay down on the bed."

I stand and walk over to the bed. I lay with my back against the coverlet.

"Ass up," you pull down the coverlet, "I can't having you making a wet mess on my bedspread, now can I."

I wriggle with embarrassment, pulling my arm over my eyes.

"Arms out," you say as you lift a length of white rope from the toy box next to the bed.

My eyes widen. We've had the rope for months but you have yet to use it.

You pick up my right arm and make a tight knot around my wrist, although you're careful to leave two fingers-width of room so that it won't chafe. Despite your displeasure at my uncontrollably horny behavior, I know that everything you do is filled with love. You pull my arm back to the bed and tie the rope to the base of the bed frame. The length of rope is slightly short, leaving my arm uncomfortably extended over the edge of the mattress.

You nod as I wriggle, trying to find the most comfortable position, "perhaps this will help you remember that I control your pleasure, my horny little minx."

You pick up my left arm and make the same knot. When you finish, I reach my left wrist over to join my right wrist on the right side of the bed. Instead, you grab the end of the length of rope and tie my left wrist to the opposite side of the bed. I now lie helpless before you.

You reach down and pick up yet another length of rope, quickly tying each of my ankles to the bed frame, leaving me spread-eagled with a cool breeze drifting against my pussy.

Finally, you plug an orange extension chord connected to our large Magic Wand Vibrator into the outlet. You set the wand next to me on the bed. You also pick up the little vibrator I purchased, which started this whole mess, and place it next to me.

Slipping a blindfold over my eyes, you run your hand down to squeeze my nipples. Pinching, twisting, kneading, massaging. Moments later, I hear the tell tail clink of nipple clamps, as your hands leave my boobs. The harsh bite of rubber clamps interrupts my reverie, as you snap the clamps onto my tender pink nipples.

I hear the weight of your feet on the floor as you walk out of the room. My thoughts race: What are you planning to do? I imagine you'll torture me with the wand. Or maybe you'll force me to cum. Why the blind fold? Why are you leaving the room? You can't leave me here!

I call out your name.

No reply.

I hear a creak next to the bed.

A feather begins to tickle my face. I feel the bed sag slightly as you sit next to me.

Slowly, you drag the feather from the lobe of my ear, down the side of my neck, over my shoulder, across the dome of my breast, down the side of my ribs, over the curve my waist, into my inner thigh. Then, you ascend my body on the other side following the same pattern. The feather descends again. I twist and wriggle away from it. This time, when you reach my inner thigh, you bring the feather back up between my legs. You tickle my clit back and forth. I moan and moan, relishing in the pleasure of the feather light touch.

You lean down to suck on my earlobe. Your whisper in my ear sends shivers through me, "Don't you dare cum, my pretty little minx, don't you dare." Your words only make me hornier, as I fight the urge that's rising within my hot clit.

You stop.

I hear a faint buzz. Then a painful tension, as you pull down on the chain connecting my nipple clamps. With a snap, they pop off. Immediately, you rub the vibrator across my sore nipples, first the right, and then the left.

"Ugnh, please, sir, uhh uhhh," I groan, unsure if I'm in pleasure or pain.

You continue for a few minutes torturing me. Then silence, and relief, as you switch off the vibrator and give my aching nipples a rest.

I hear a click, and a far louder buzz, as you turn on the Magic Wand.

You spread the lips of my pussy with your fingers, and slowly run the wand across them, carefully avoiding my clit. You circle the wand torturously over my lips again and again. I strain against the ropes holding my body, twisting and turning, trying to get you to move the Wand onto my clit.

"Please, sir, please, please, please, touch me, please," I beg.

"As you wish," you reply, "remember, no cuming."

You press the bulbous head of the vibrator against my clit and my hips shoot up as much as the ropes allow. As you see me getting close, you start to count:

"One, two, three, four, " I hold on, breathing deeply in an effort not to cum, "five." As you utter the last number, you move the Wand away. My hips sink back into the bed.

Ten seconds later, you press the vibrator to my clit again. I shriek.

"One, two, three, four, five," again, you move it away, just as I'm about to come.

You repeat this pattern five, six, seven times. I begin to lose track, as my body becomes a blur of barely contained desperation and pleasure.

Your hand reaches up to remove my blindfold; I look into your eyes as your hand settles gently around the base of my neck. Just resting there, firmly, possessively.

"One, two three," my hips are shooting up, straining, my pussy is dripping and twitching, "four, five, NOW," you shout, giving my throat a slight squeeze.

With a moan and a grunt, my eyes roll up as my pussy spasms, I feel myself shooting into the orgasmic plateau of no return as my body gives into your power.

You keep the vibrator pressed to my clit, as my orgasm stretches on, and I begin to scream and thrash.

You move the vibrator away and release your grip on my throat. You stroke my hair and smile down at me. You lean down and kiss my lips. I'm so exhausted; I can barely kiss you back.

"See," you whisper, "isn't it better when I give you the pleasure?"

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Perfect little read

Good pace, it is easy to get into the story and care for the protagonists 🤗 loved it and would read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A good read

This is one of the best writings that I have read on this site. I liked that the characters seemed real. I would like to see this story developed more.

fanfarefanfarealmost 10 years ago
puzzled

subminx, I was perusing some of the new postings to this site. I read your story, it's not my personal kink but it is always interesting to consider something outside my vanilla life.

Then I read the comments and thought they were rather unfair to you. The problem with the pictures and for that matter a lot of other web tech failures is the result of the mishmash of incompatible technology we have inflicted upon ourselves. A system designed by Rube Goldberg, doomed to chronic chaos.

To be fair,, the complaints should have been directed to the site administrators.

As for your writing, I think it it clear and concise You have a clever writing style and create interesting characters.

As for errors, spell check as well as all other auto-correcting functions are homophone-phobic. Constantly replacing what you type with similar sounding words. Of course sometimes, the wrong word in the right context can be hilarious!

.I hope you will continue to write your stories and post them to this site. Where we cheap buggers can read them for free!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
new artist needed

illos were quite poor. Suggest you read A Life Changing Trip With Mother for an example of a well illustrated story,

subminxsubminxalmost 10 years agoAuthor
To both

Epiphany -- I appreciate the time you took to write your feedback, although I'm afraid that asking for me to choose a different writing style isn't overly constructive feedback. Modeling writing on what "everyone else is doing" will probably be no more successful than jumping in a puddle or shooting up some heroin because "everyone else is doing it." In fact, I would go so far as to say, if you dislike the writing, as I dislike puddles and heroin, how I go about writing (present tense, past tense, first person, or third person) will have little to do with how much you like my writing.

Shawn -- Thank you for your retributions to Epiphany, but more importantly, thank you for your feedback. I will certainly be looking into the editors program, and (to repeat myself) I appreciate the particular points you made and will be considering them in my future writing and for edits to the non-illustrated version of this story.

The illustrated version will be coming down for a variety of reasons -- but the story itself will remain in the BDSM category. Epiphany, if you have further responses - I kindly request that you send me a private message rather than commenting further on the BDSM categorized version of the story.

Thank you both for the lively discussion!

ShawnSwiftShawnSwiftalmost 10 years ago
First-person, present tense novels

Hunger games: "On August 17, 2012, Amazon announced The Hunger Games Trilogy as its top seller, surpassing the record previously held by the Harry Potter series."

~Bosman, Julie (August 17, 2012). "Amazon Crowns ‘Hunger Games' as Its Top Seller, Surpassing Harry Potter Series". The New York Times.

The Catcher in the Rye: Around 250,000 copies are sold each year with total sales of more than 65 million books.

~J. D. Salinger's Holden Caulfield, Aging Gracelessly". The Washington Post. Retrieved 2007-01-21

"Cohn estimates that about 60 to 65 percent of YA fiction is written in the first person and present tense, but not because YA readers can’t handle complexity—take a look at the average high school or AP English reading lists for evidence to the contrary—but because the simplicity and immediacy of that particular style helps writers develop the voices of their characters."

~theatlantic(dot)com/entertainment/archive/2013/10/the-8-habits-of-highly-successful-young-adult-fiction-authors/280722/

I found those quotes within 2 mins on google, but I'm sure that if I invested more time, I'd be able to find even more evidence to back my claim.

As for everything else "Epiphany"-Jones has spouted, it's just hateful vitriol not worth answering. The fact that he's hiding behind a puppet account to abuse newbie authors says it all. How old are you anyway Jones? Your profile says 41-50, but I'm going to call bullshit. You read like a 20 something who is angry at the world.

Sorry about that Submix. Anyway, the tense and perspective of your writing are both viable (Hunger games dethroned Potter - jesus), but as the saying goes, "Haters gonna hate." I will suggest though that you find an editor who will help you polish your writing, and grow as an author.

Take care, and I wish you well,

Shawn

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesalmost 10 years ago
Edit this.

You found one example of a story written in the present tense. The example was written in the third person, not first person. And with that one example, you act like you've shot down all my arguments about how rare it is to find a well-written story that's told in present tense form.

The fact that, how'd you put it? "The only other instance of the style I've seen to date..."? Wouldn't you say that kinda "validates" what I had to say? You may have only found one story that WAS well-received, but you can't throw a stick without hitting a metric shit-ton that were NOT.

I stand by my first comment, and laugh at yours. The fact that it's sitting at less than 3.5 stars, as I see by checking, would also seem to support a lack of appreciation for it.

As for my absence of stories submitted with this username: My stories have no links to this username. That's intentional. There are dipshits with long memories, who read a negative comment from a specific username, and then blast a story based not on how good or bad it is, but that it was submitted by the person who just told them how bad their own story was. I've submitted over a dozen stories (under a name I'm not about to reveal), and all but two are over 4.5 stars. The two that aren't are still over 4.0 stars. So bite me.

(And by the way, telling someone, "Oh, don't listen to him. He's just jealous!"? Isn't that what the overprotective moms of loser kids tell them when they get harassed? "He's just jealous of your hand-knit Rudolph The Red-nosed Reindeer sweater. It looks wonderful. Just ignore him!" roflmao.)

Oh, and if you want the last word, go ahead: it's yours. I'm done with this.

ShawnSwiftShawnSwiftalmost 10 years ago
Edit -

"Mittens" is third-person, present tense, but my points still stand.

ShawnSwiftShawnSwiftalmost 10 years ago
First of all -

Epiphany_Jones is clearly jealous of your talent. Unable to create anything of his own, he instead insults other people's work. In addition to that, not only is the first-person, present-tense mode of storytelling viable, it is also well received. The only other instance of the style I've seen to date is, "Mittens" by Feather Watt. It's currently rated at 4.82 (4th for lesbian top-lists in the past 12 months, in a 4-way tie for 9th place in the hall of fame), has 51 comments, (most stories don't get more than 20), and 80k views. If that's not "Well received," then I don't know what is. "Epiphany"-Jones indeed...

I personally enjoyed the first-person perspective, and the way the story was presented on the whole. The artwork was vague enough that it allowed our imagination to freely roam, while at the same time it tied into the story nicely. The plot was simple, yet believable, and the characters were "real."

The only criticisms I'd put forth are there were a few punctuation errors, and you were a bit too specific at certain points. An ellipsis (...) should only be used to denote unsaid words at the end of a paragraph, chapter or story. If you wish to denote a lapse in time between words, use a hyphen (-).

As for the specifics, there were a couple that leapt out at me. The first was the descriptors you used for the dom, and the second was the heroine's bra-size. If I'm not mistaken, it was your intent for the "dom" to be any male who read this, so I'd have left him as vague as possible. The bra-size is a bit of a miss for a couple of reasons: 1. most men don't understand the measurements 2. the more you leave to the reader's imagination, the better.

The last point I wanted to make is, you should consider looking into the editor's program. A second set of eyes can help you catch errors you wouldn't be able to on your own. Because you wrote the story, you know what should be there, instead of what is actually there.

5/5 You should keep writing/drawing, you've definitely got talent.

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesalmost 10 years ago
Didn't care for the artwork. Didn't care for the story.

I wasn't impressed with your writing ability. The story wasn't engaging in any way. Also, the whole "stream of consciousness" effect that results whenever a hack author attempts to write a story in First Person, Present Tense, just fell completely flat. I make that comment when I run across failed attempts (which would be at least 19 out of 20), and I'm not alone. Plenty of people dislike FP,PT when they're reading a story. In fact FEW PEOPLE have positive things to say about it. The reason for it is it comes across as "I'm a pervert, making up shit as I type it, with little or no preparation." It's the literary equivalent of having some obnoxious lech standing in your personal space, and making you extraordinarily uncomfortable while they whisper their fantasy in your ear, and all you can think is, "Good God! Their breath stinks, and they're standing WAY too close. Where's my taser?"

Maybe you have some writing talent. I didn't see it here. Why don't you attempt to write a story the way THE MAJORITY of people here do? First person, PAST tense. Or second or third person, PAST tense. Don't know what I'm talking about? Pick a story at random. Odds are really good it won't be first person, present tense. (For reasons I've already elaborated on.) Go from there.

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