All Comments on 'Plotting a Course Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
JEALOUS!

I don't know how u do it but it's amazing and I love how u made everyone accept u Eg. The mother and the pastor and I airways have stands of finding the perfect guy but so far nothing for me. And u got me jealous by how u have the perfect match

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Glad the story continues

So glad Robbie and Bobby's story will continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love!

I was hoping you would do some of the story from Robs pov. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
please keep writing!

Love this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A wonderful story continues

You have managed to continue your wonderful love story -- and I enjoy Rob's point to view. I know his masculine and muscled hairy chest is pressed up against Bobby's back and chest, and how much Bobby loves that sexy contact. Rob's big cock and his hairy thighs and pubes are such a turn on for Bobby. Rob shows such loving concern for Bobby, taking him to the water park, and sleeping with him and spending time with him. They make a wonderful loving couple that belong together, and they seem ready to weather whatever strife they must endure. But please, make it each on them, as they are such great guys! I'm looking forward to their going to prom perhaps, to their graduation, and to their reunions during the school year. Keep up the great storytelling!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Casey 1988

Doing both points of view is something that gets the story told more deeply. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
so glad u didnt stop with part one

so looking forward to finding out they grow together and being separated at college and long distance relationships, I know love doesn't always run straight (pun intended) so hoping love will shine through it all and they stary strong together

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

RE READING FROM THE START AS I CANNOT REMEMBER READING BIG JONATHAN

DustyDevilDustyDevilalmost 7 years ago
Great Reading

The entire series has been an excellent story please keep the excellent writing. I have enjoyed this series very much.

DustyDevilDustyDevilover 2 years ago

This story rates in the top 5 of those posted on this site. I am hopeful that you might perhaps some additional stories .

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