by Perfideous
Sweet. Predictable. You didn't need the poor excuse at the "sexual description." ruined the sweetness
It had beginning elements of Charles and Claire - and that's a complement. Could have been developed more that way and been a terrific novel instead of one so short a story. Maybe next time.
azsam
The comments puzzle me; this is not a sweet story- it's a revenge story. A karma story if you like. Her to Troy at the start and at the end.
Its for everyone who's been humiliated and wished...