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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
this is a nice piece of writing

not much else to say except nice job to notnice66

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
plumbed during work

what can i say, i loved it. love to read more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
mmmmmmmm good

Hot very hot

Bridget69Bridget69over 18 years ago
What's work...

without a little play? And better than that, role play? That's a good way of demonstrating and sampling the merchandise. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Superb lesbian anal story

One of the best lesbian stories I've read... and one of the best anal stories too. Brilliant slight reluctance on the part of the fuckee that gave way to lust. Loved the way it almost became too much, the pulling on the nipples, excellent. And very well written - as I said elsewhere I'm gradually working my way through all your stories - all cleverly done. Perfect blend of raw sex and wariness, genuine human emotions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good! Really good!

This was super-sexy, and clever too, with the power relations getting reversed in mid-story. Very, very sexy. It's good to hear about women being really dirty with each other. Thank you.

bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesalmost 16 years ago
loved it!

You did a brilliant job. I was left with some question marks about the woman, especially the cold eyes you described near the end. It allows your story to go in different directions if you go for a sequel, though would it be better to just leave readers using their imaginations? That as a writer is always the dilemma I have and when I wrote an incest story I had nothing but emails asking me to go further when I wanted to leave it to them! So why not leave people to create their own chapter 2?!

Peter Grimm.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Hun

that was hot. Hottest story i have read!!

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demure in public and bad nasty slutty girl in private (btw, pic is not me but similar) I've written some stories, so please take time to read one http://bdsmtest.org/r/xLKKzJb9 https://dirtycode.io/HISCU