All Comments on 'Pocket Full of Innocence Ch. 03'

i thought this was very good , hate to see it end as i could see this going so many directions, but still very enjoyable ride , thx nathan

you devil!!!! You should consider a prologue for Rochelle and Gavin to get together to talk about their ordeal and see whee it goes from there. Great story and the finish was (as I said in the beginning) devilish.

Very excellent writing and a great plot. I do wish they would have had wild sex. Hopefully you will continue to write in this genre.

Fascinating twist, there at the end of the story. But it shifts everything! Now, instead of two people thrown into a situation largely beyond their control, now we have Gavin as something of a pervert with the ability to mollify, at minimum, the severity of the circumstances; but made a choice to do otherwise, thus nullifying any degree of innocence he might have had. (And all this time, I was thinking that they should have just found two rocks and beat the chain between the handcuffs until they at least were separated.) Absolutely a great story otherwise, but a weird ending.

-- KK in Texas

Absolutely one of the best stories I have read here.

Liked the little twist at the end.

Superbly written. Thank you for sharing with us.

And very enjoyable. The last paragraph explains the title. I would love to know more about them. Maybe a new series, new encounters between them? Maybe remembering their "good time" they see each other again? Anyway, I enjoyed it & looking forward for more. Thanks for sharing.

Would love to see one or two more chapters bringing this to a grand conclusion. I think it could end here but would be interesting to read about the day or days after and the consequenses to Rochelle from unleashing herself with Gavin.

This is a good story, too bad it was marred by pseudo psychoanalysis. You portrayed your narrator as being extremely well educated, yet you wrote him/her ignorantly using words are so wrong for the context that the sentence becomes nonsensical.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

Lol. Damn that ending with the key was totally unexpected. With the whirlwind of events and emotions I did not think of that. Though with magic cuffs I thought there would be a trick release on them.

We need to read a follow up of Rochelle's and Gavin's return to lust and handcuffs........ hope you write one.

BS....

This story needs one maybe two more chapters. One dealing with the aftermath and two of their continued affair after. I mean you had a paragraph of her having to suck off Ernesto and Gavin got the same and only was truly rewarded with getting to finger fuck her. Seems like Gavin should at least get to fuck her when they are home in a more conducive environment.