All Comments on 'Point Hollow Ch. 03'

the SBI by one particular "agent"! Fatboy "sargent" isn't qualified to take out the trash, and he is sticking his nose into bigger business than he can take. Someone needs to put a 1911 muzzle about even with that boy's prostate gland and see what happens with rapidly expanding hot gas. Sharples can't even tell the truth to his "friends"... I'm waiting for the Council to get "reduced" too! GREAT STORY - keep it commin'!!

along with a drug, gun, kidnapping and politics. A typical who dun-it. TK U MLJ LV NV

Another great chapter. Something paranormal??

Did anyone else note where the three missing persons was found. Near Apple Grove, the center for CofC and potentially the Superior Bloodlines out of Troy’s state and his hometown. Could the final showdown for CofC take place there?Also what is Mom Phyllis secret in Apple Grove? Could Dr Jonas have impregnated her when he rape her many years ago, or watched Dr Jonas take Elizabeth virginity??

*****Twists and turns, but so entertaining. Thanks for sharing.