All Comments on '(Pokemon) Go For Me'

I enjoyed reading the slow luring, and how you evoke all the vivid memories. Excelent build-up and nice pay-off!

I also liked the geeky references.

Since this story is more about soleful emotions than wild one-off sex, I would consider moving this to the "romance" category.

But I did like it. The people were real.

there is quite a significant difference between the quality of the English in a story by a Brit compared to that written by a Yank