All Comments on 'Poker Night with the Neighbors'

by Dayspring69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
We hope for chapter two

Great story! Love the plot and hope you will tell us what happening at the party.

newtype2525newtype2525almost 9 years ago
An improvement!

I hope to read more very soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Write your own story

Lame recreation of somebody else's stuff. Create your own. And pointing out that there were errors in the original? Weak.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved it

This was a super hot story. Very well written. It had all the aspects that I personally enjoy. Great job. I will definitely look for more of this authors stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Can't stop thinking about this one

So my boyfriend read this to me almost over a year ago. And it's kinda a thing we love to do .. i kmow what your thinking ... but its cheesy, sexy and edcautional ... so he reads these "bedtime story" to me from time to time. Well .. . Immediately with in 5 mins of listening to his deep well spoken voice I knew i was hooked. And actually really was ready to get fucked . And even a year later I reminded him of this particular story ..so he found it and suggested I read to him this time. The story was hotter than i remembered i watced h him Jack off his cock. And I wish this passage was like a Netflix sequel for real

The only thing that kept throwing me off was all the extra weried wording around black cock. So just a piece of advice. Just call it BBC OR BIG BLACK COCK. it's universal . Trust . But other than that loved it .nailed it. Killed it. Keep them coming.!!! Love from Austin Fucking Texas Baby!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

No it is fictitious racist man hating propaganda.

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