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by Irish Moss

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davion2308davion2308over 13 years ago
Not bad

Not bad, but you could have built up her being a worse person. You got right into the action. A lot of people want to get right into it, but when you lead with "Pretentious" then show us how irritating she is.

Good write. Do more.

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I've always had a vivid imagination and fantasizing about the women who have passed through my life goes back as long as I can remember. Upon discovering online erotica, I started to think that maybe I should go ahead and write down some of these fantasies and submit them to ...