All Comments on 'Police Work'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hot... Hot... Extremely Hot!

You have to have more chapters... please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
gentleness:

too many chapters can cause a story to be carried away.it can make it more than need be and not stay with the peaceful theme of the story.it was not a lot of outrageous sex that makes the black man super human and brings the two of them more normal than one may think.she is not a slut and he is pleased with how it happened and how it is to continue as she does also.thank you ,joe willie

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