All Comments on 'Polly Plans Her Next Game'

Story is only as hot as the people in it. Polly is a sorry assed selfish shallow slut that nobody likes so really who cares? You need to make her believeable and likeable before anybody gives a fuck what you have her do. Now she is just a lowlife dog fucking in the yard.

Good stuff, can't wait for the next chapter.

This will make a hot series, Just don't rush it. Please carry on.

Loved this story like all your stories acdd123! keep writing, look forward to your stories seemed to long since the last one!

Dude...they're awesome stories, but let's not pretend that there's too much imagination. Basically, they feed a fetish. So please, just keep rolling them monthly, and you'll gain huge respect. Thanks!

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nice to read something a little twisted like this - I'd like to see Polly become even more of a bitch!