All Comments on 'Pondering her Future'

I appreciate the work you did in your research for this, but the story doesn't feel fully developed. I was really enjoying it for the opening up through Lillie's meeting with Omeo, but after that it kinda fell apart. Most of the story reads more like a list of events instead of a story. Lillie's first time meeting her father Thor is a single sentence declaring that they discussed strategy. That really should have been an entire scene. I can't imagine that Lillie wouldn't have questions for him about why they had never met outside of dreams, or wanting to establish a personal relationship. I really hope you keep on writing, but find someone that you can bounce ideas off of. Over all this felt like a plan for a story, not the story itself.

Very liberated for the Norse Gods.

I love how the gods and goddesses communicate with the mortals so that everyone understands and accepts. Plus Thor and Odin! Please write more of these fantasy/mythological stories. Most of your fans love them just as they are written.

Wonderfully different.