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All Comments on 'Pooja: My Wife Ch. 01'

by vkaprasad1981

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ythebadgerythebadgerabout 11 years ago
I think we should replace the word 'cuckold'

with 'Indian.' Very poor effort.

Zed56Zed56about 11 years ago
This is a Joke Right?

If you are serious this was really bad. No chapter 2 is needed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hey good job

Hey,

this is a good start. I would love to hear how pooja gets subjugated. Please continue writing.

This is great platform you have built.

samsinsamsinabout 11 years ago
keep it up!!

I voted for your effort. Keep up the writing irrespective of what anyone thinks or write about you..

best wishes and lots of love.

luvbirdsluvbirdsabout 11 years ago
Good start

looking forward to read more...please dont put ur self in the place of cockhold...

in ur next part

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I wish this story was written in your native indian OR english, but not Both!!

English only please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
poor writing

The writer is badly in need of an editor.

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