All Comments on 'Pool Boy Ch. 19'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Over the top..

Dad could have been 'just' a blackmailer and that would have been believable. (Well, as believable as anything else this "story" has turned into...) Adding the child porn, prostitution and human trafficking is just too over the top. If you're going to that extreme, at least add 'Illegal Dumping at Sea' - THAT would have been funny.

Clancy31015Clancy31015almost 7 years ago
Give us more

Maybe Olivia and Sophia's husbands will end up getting taken down by Emma's husband with all three husbands getting disemboweled in jail before they can get divorced or convicted and Emma, Sophia, Olivia, and Alexis move in with Hunter and combine resources and live in one house while they all start popping out a new generation and attend college. Maybe a Polygamist Wedding?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
waiting

waiting on more chapters to come thanks

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